Four men sit around a table gambling on a dice game and drinking their fill. These men have been inseparable for years, best friends since high school. Three of the men are brothers by the names of Yudi, Bhima, and Sahad Pandava. These three brothers are very skilled mountain climbers and are planning a trip to climb Mt. Everest in the Himalayas. The fourth man, Draup, has never been as interested in mountaineering, to the disappointment of his three best friends. On this particular night, already drunk and gambling, Bhima proposes a wager to Draup: they both roll the dice, if Bhima rolls a higher score, Draup must accompany them on their Everest adventure. With his judgement clouded by the booze, Draup agrees to the bet.
[6 months later]
Draup straps on his pack at the Everest basecamp, all the while kicking himself for accepting that stupid bet 6 months ago. He exits his tent wondering if he can still back out, but remembers how many times the Pandava brothers reiterated that "a bet is a bet" over the last few months as they trained. The four men set off on the adventure of a lifetime.
After days of trekking up the mountain, they can almost see the peak. On the final day, the all four men awaken ready to summit Everest. Just a few hours from the top, they come across a horse standing in there path. Immediately they all know that this is no normal animal. Nothing can survive the conditions at the highest peak on Earth. Their shock intensifies when the horse begins to speak. He tells them that he is the gatekeeper to the peak of Everest and they must earn his permission to continue moving forward. Wondering what they could do to be allowed to pass, Draup reaches into his pocket and pulls out a set of dice. The same dice that got him to this point. He proposes they gamble for the horse's permission and he agrees.
Yudi goes first, he rolls a 9. Confident in his roll he smirks and hands the dice to the horse. The horse flips the dice and rolls a 12. Yudi hands the dice to Bhima and disappointedly begins his journey down. Bhima rolls an 11 and thinks to himself there is no way he loses. Another 12. Bhima begins his way down. Sahad nervously picks up the dice and rolls a 2, snake eyes. He begins his journey down before the horse even rolls. Finally, Draup picks up the dice and rolls; 3. The horse rolls for the last time; 2. The horse tells Draup that the dice decided he was the only one worthy of passing through to the peak. He presses on and reaches the summit.
Bibliography: Mahabharata by R.K. Narayan (Link)
Mt. Everest (Source) |
Hayden!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story and appreciate you shortening the names! I found it so hard trying to read the Mahabharata last week because there were so many different characters and all of their names were so long. I love that you took different parts of the Mahabharata and made you're own story. I think it's an interesting writing technique and I think I'm going to try it out on a future story!
Hi, Hayden!
ReplyDeleteI like how you kept the plot similar to the original story. You incorporated part B, C, and D into your story. I do not like the idea of gambling and how the Pandavas got sent into exile because of that, but I enjoyed how the Pandavas and Drupadi gambled with the horse in your story. I also appreciate that you made the names easier to read and remember.
Hey Hayden,
ReplyDeleteYou created a really interesting story that was fun to read. You took a lot of character and put them into a strange situation but still stuck true to some themes in the epic. I really enjoyed the part where Drupadi gambled against the horse and only beat the roll by 1. I look forward to reading some of your stories in the future!
HAYDEN,
ReplyDeleteYOU ARE INCREDIBLE. Your website is always a great one to look at, and you make it better each and every week. Writing is obviously a gift blessed to you, and it seems like there is just nothing you cannot do. One of these days I hop blogger comes out with a Direct Message system, so I can slide right in. I want to mirror my writing after you throughout the semester. You are amazing, beautiful, and bright and I. Love. You.
Adios,
Brooks